Post by Yami on May 17, 2007 16:38:24 GMT -5
The great crater that had become Route One roared up at the sky, jagged edges like large teeth of a parasite on the skin of earth. It swallowed up at endless blue, attempting to eat as much as possible and in turn being swallowed as well. Gnarled dips and valleys were filled with water that reflected the blue sky above, azure with puffy white clouds that swam like great koi over the lake-like sky.
The destruction of surrounding trees was almost beautiful, the tattered trunks of trees scorched and either hanging haphazardly from their contorted stumps or slumped onto the ground. They lacked leaves and just the bare branches scraped at people passing by, grappling for help or for someone to save them. The smell of char had been dampened by the water and now only the sticky, earth smell of mud assaulted one's nose with only the slightest hint of burnt grass.
As Kinsei stood at the edge of all this destruction a pain gripped at his heart mixed with a delighted excitement from his other personality. Not a soul stirred around the desecrated land giving the area the delicious silence of death. The earthy smell mingled with the burned grass fragrance alighting comfort and anger in Kinsei's soul.
As the trainer stood there, a tear rolled down his cheek, both out of joy and hate. The emotions of his body knitted and tangled, Sonji loving the powerful feel of death and Kinsei paining at the awful feeling of loss. All of it seemed to stew and stir, swirl and twirl, mixing and combining until it came to become a single emotion and color. Bleak black.
This black could only be described as complete numbness that nawed away at the soul like a hungry monster, silencing all other emotions. Slowly the boy lowered himself into a crouch and burried his face into his hands, shaking slightly with the effort of surviving under that immense, biting emotion. It was a loving hate that drove him into the numbness.
I'm just seeing what everyone thinks of this. ^^ The character has split personality disorder so that should help explain some things.
The destruction of surrounding trees was almost beautiful, the tattered trunks of trees scorched and either hanging haphazardly from their contorted stumps or slumped onto the ground. They lacked leaves and just the bare branches scraped at people passing by, grappling for help or for someone to save them. The smell of char had been dampened by the water and now only the sticky, earth smell of mud assaulted one's nose with only the slightest hint of burnt grass.
As Kinsei stood at the edge of all this destruction a pain gripped at his heart mixed with a delighted excitement from his other personality. Not a soul stirred around the desecrated land giving the area the delicious silence of death. The earthy smell mingled with the burned grass fragrance alighting comfort and anger in Kinsei's soul.
As the trainer stood there, a tear rolled down his cheek, both out of joy and hate. The emotions of his body knitted and tangled, Sonji loving the powerful feel of death and Kinsei paining at the awful feeling of loss. All of it seemed to stew and stir, swirl and twirl, mixing and combining until it came to become a single emotion and color. Bleak black.
This black could only be described as complete numbness that nawed away at the soul like a hungry monster, silencing all other emotions. Slowly the boy lowered himself into a crouch and burried his face into his hands, shaking slightly with the effort of surviving under that immense, biting emotion. It was a loving hate that drove him into the numbness.
I'm just seeing what everyone thinks of this. ^^ The character has split personality disorder so that should help explain some things.
